Which I will then try and get published, I'm being pessimistic about it, but I still hope :-)
But these are two Cinquains that I rewrote as Gogyohkas, I think they sound better this way :-)
Fooled You
Tall policeman coming toward me
his eyes squint, mine widen
he stops in front of me and takes my arm
my heart flutters in my chest
he leans down, "Hey beautiful"
The Many Forms of Love
their holdings hands, he rubs her arm
looking in his eyes, she smiles warmly
I'm grinning to myself seeing this cute scene
I'm thinking 'kiss her'.......he does
I still smile remembering what inspired me to write that last one :-)
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